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Richard - Looks bright and attractive - has every aspect that a print ad should have - Too basic  - Link towards other advertisement Changes Due to the feedback that I had received, I will consider keeping the colour scheme as it is the same colour used for the packaging. Also, I will include more things on the print ad, such as more text around it, which would be phrases to describe the chocolate itself. Maria - More details on the poster - Add a shadow onto the flake - More effects on the Flake image - Add more information of the campaign Changes After the feedback that I had received, I will add some information about the chocolate, such as adding a sentence at the bottom of the poster and having some phrases around the chocolate to describe it. Also, I  will keep the colour scheme of the background to match the colour of the packaging

Feedback Anniel  From the footage that I have shown which was the rough copy of my advert, what I have done well is that I managed to get a clear shot of the main product itself.  Also, I would need to make sure that I add some graphics at the beginning of the ad I could add some upbeat music  Changes -  due to the feedback that I have received, I will consider these feedbacks that I have received, which is to maybe add some music Richard  I could add in some graphics around the beginning of the ad to ensure that the audience could have an idea of what the actual product is.  add some background music sound effects when he is distracted try and increase the volume off dialogue but decrease when music is played Changes  Considering the feedback that I had received, I will add some music in the background, preferably when the chocolate first appears as it is the main focus. However, I will not consider adding graphics at the beginning of the ad as I would want to have a storyline in whic